I found myself tearing up a little at this. It's so beautiful and strong and raw, and I really just don't know what else to say other than I loved it. And the last line? Perfection. Completed the whole piece flawlessly and gave me goose bumps. A very powerful piece of writing, thank you very much for posting it!
Lucy X_O
Author's response
thank you very much for reviewing. I'm really happy you liked it and this review really made me smile.