I am enjoying the hell out of this story. It is quite original. I am only sorry that I have been totally lax in reviewing up until now.
Harry/ Luna? Hurray! No H/Hr, or even worst H/G. Gah! What would he really see in these two besides the obvious? harry and Luna's interactions are refreshing, and also quite funny. harry has abilities, but he has to achieve them, instead of the usual over night power trip. Looking forward to reading about chapter 1...and maybe beyond?
Author's response
Thank you for your kind words. We are almost back to chapter 1 just a few loose ends like Karina to tie up. ~Jim