That story just was...
disturbing, and mesmerizing and beautiful in such a weird, dark way.
I loved it, I think you have a lot of talent in the insane POV.
Please write more... this is going on my favorite's list.
Author\'s Response: Thanks. ^_^ This was one I was worried about, because Crazy!Al is just WRONG on so many levels, so I'm really glad someone out there enjoyed it.