First of all I really liked it!! I liked how you really described the characters and the way she felt about them.
Second of all thank you soooo much for writing about my story ! :D you are awesome haha xD
oh and would it be cool if you were the best friend in my story? you didn't write the part you wanted but I think your character would be awesome for that part! :)
Thanks, I can't really NOT be descriptive when I write (sometimes I get overly descriptive and confusing but I'm working on breaking that) and your welcome! People should check your story out. The first story's always the one you feel most nervous about, in my opinion. I almost had a heart attack when I posted my first ever fic on ff.net lol.
And yes, I'd love to be the best friend! :) xx