Review for Under City Lights

Under City Lights

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-06-23

Yay, Juliet sung! That's gotta be a good thing, right? :)

Holy crap... I thought that you got her reaction to Brendon telling her that he liked her spot on. It's what I would have done, probably. Then when she gets home and finds out that her mum let him in...! I would have absolutely flipped. I'm still so interested to see how everything goes between her and Ryan now, and ugh! I just wanna find out what happens next!

Such a good update and I can't wait for the next one! :D

Author's response

Very, very good. :)

Aw, well thank you! I try to make it as realistic as possible, you know? :D

Thank you so much!