When I read this it reminded me heavily of a fic called catch 22 on ffn. Except not quite as good. This was good for what it was. Still it would be cool if you wrote a fic with those 10 things in mind. I would definitely read it. Anyways just a suggestion.
Author's response
Heh. This was more of a character study than an actual fic; the "ten facts about" thing is sososo common in fandom that it's an easy sort of writing exercise. :) I'd love to know what you didn't like about this, since I'm always looking for constructive criticism. Thanks so much for reviewing!