Absolutely amazing, the rain made me think of the music vid for the song. I have a few hours left to enter, so I should get a move on. I'll never be as good as you though, you're a genius Lucy. This was beautiful and full of emotion, it felt as though I was running through the rain, don't delete it! I loved ''debris of his detonation'' I don't know why but I just love that line. x
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Thank you so very much! I'm so glad you thought so, because I was pretty nervous about posting it. Thanks so much for reviewing :D