What a great start to the story, but how could you end it there for... I hate cilff hangers. Anyhow, I know what Harry done was foolish, but Dumbledore wasn't going to help him... so how else was he meant to do anything. The only fool is Dumbledore, for not training Harry before hand.
Could you hurry up with the update, as I would like to see what happens next.
Author's response
lol you think that was a bad cliffy? Here's a small teaser of the next chapter, which was going to be how the first ended... enjoy! (evil laughter)
Head pounding.
The ceeling spun.
Agonising pain.
The world darkened.
Silence.
Harry shot up with a gasp. His body felt... strange. Something was wrong with him. He felt cold, so cold. Harry opened his mouth to ask what happened when a splintering crash spun him around. Before he could move, a shape leapt into the room, slamming a wood stake through his heart. The world blacked out once more.