Oh you're not going to do that stupid talking in their heads thing are you cause if that's the case you have lost yourself a reader.
Author's response
I have to admit, when I read your review, I heard it said in a rather snarky tone. However, I'm sure I was imagining things and someone surely wouldn't be that rude, so I'll pretend I'm just crazy. =)
In response to the actual review, no, they aren't going to talk in their heads. I'm not such a huge fan of that, so I like to pretend it doesn't exist. There will be a magical connection, however, and if you have a problem with that, I hope you find another story to suit your needs.
Much thanks,
S.D. Hopkins