This was just amazing and I loved the ending, it just wrapped up the whole thing perfectly.
And yeah, there was a few errors but not that much. Maybe you should think about getting a beta so you don't have to worry about all that =] but again, this was good
Author's response
Thank you very much I'm glad you liked it. I really was nervous about posting this. :)
Yhea I'm brobably getting one.
(Just ignore my own review below this hehe)