Eep. I have shivers! That was really good- poetry is such a personal thing, but I really felt this struck a chord with me. Your use of language and rhythm was great, and I especially loved this line: 'With my face carved from tears of the broken'. I wish I'd come up with that, it's brilliant!
A great little thought-provoking read. Thank you very much for posting.
Lucy X_O
Author's response
Thank you! It means a lot, especially coming from you.