Ohmygod. How the hell doesn't this have any reviews yet? It's fucking BRILLIANT. And I am in no way exaggerating. Honestly- the way you used words to evoke the right feelings and create the scene was masterful, and you drew me right into Mikey's world from the first paragraph. Your use of writing technique was amazing; your comparison of Mikey and the forest was...Wow; 'In a way, Mikey related to the forest. They had so much in common; they were both so scary but at the same time so scared of themselves that they didn’t know how to act around anyone, anything. They were both dark and uncharted, and, even though Mikey would never admit it, even to himself, they were both very, very lonely.'
Duude, that's amazing! I loved the whole thing; the dark imagery, the agony from one, simple thing. It was just...I could gush about this all day, but let me just say that this is one of the best stories I have read in a very long time.
Lucy X_O
Author's response
ohgod, i mean, what the hell, fucking wow :D thank you! so much! i didn't think it was that good since i wrote it so quickly and everything :D fuck, just, thanks! great to know you liked it (: