GOD. There has to be a shrine to your name somewhere on this Earth, because you really are legendary. I don't have much time to review (reading this at a McDonald's restaurant - my aunt is giving me dirty looks), but I would just like to say that the fluency in your writing is simply marvellous. Good lord. I feel like a second grader with a crayon when I compare my stories to yours. Mind you, the crayon a very tasteful shade of purple that is pleasant to the eye, but still. Brilliantly done. You just take your time when it comes to writing, okay? No one's going to come after you with flaming bags of seaweed if you're a little late with an update. At least, I hope they won't, because then I'd be screwed as well...
Whatever. This still remains my favourite story.
~ Haili