(#) brad 2006-11-01
"denying that Neville was having anywhere near as good a time holding Ginny" - heh. Ditto the charms on Ginny's feet!
I enjoyed the paragraph describing Luna's 'blossoming'. Nice.
So they're now showering together - as in being naked together? Was the jump to this level of intimacy in this chapter, in the big bed, or did I miss things?
I thought the house-elf thing was a bit of a large segue off the track of the chapter.
Author's response
Yes, they were 'intimate' (ie the reason behind Hermione's parseltongue remark), but it was off-camera.
"T"