I have to say I was quite surprised at the way this story started and it will be interesting to see how it goes with a strong Neville from the beginning.
Author's response
Thanks, it was actually my goal to see if I could write a story where the characters kept their clothes on for the whole story GRIN It was a fun story, but the lack of conflict caused me to lose interest in writing it after a while, which is why I wrapped it up the way I did.
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