Review for Personalised stories anyone?

Personalised stories anyone?

(#) Mikeys_Glasses 2012-07-07

Name: Anna Carlisle
Nickname: None :p

Appearance: Choppy, dark brown hair that goes just to shoulders, light blue eyes, fair skin with a few freckles across her nose if you look close enough, usually has a little bit of darkness under her eyes, very short and small for her age. (17)
 
Personality: Sarcastic and quick-tempered, swears quite a bit, gets frustrated at stuff easily, very impatient, acts tough to cover up self consciousness, can sometimes be affectionate with people she likes, but still snarky.

Likes: Screwing around with computers, musicals, playing video games, and Harry Potter, but she doesn't tell anyone. 
Dislikes/fears: Is terrified of thunder and will literally curl herself up in blankets and shake during a storm. 

What do you want the story to be about?: Possible her and Mikey trying to play video games and failing epically? You can tale the fear and to whatever you can make out of that, I would just like some fluff~