Review for Torn
I honestly don't think I can fully express how this story made me feel because this just left me incoherent. That's a good thing by the way. It was just so beautiful and heartbreaking and moving and all those wonderful things. You really are an amazing writer; be proud of your skill. As for a rating out of 10? 11. Just because. :)
Oh, I don't know if you already knew, but since you liked the original thing, I thought I'd tell you that there's a new part to my story 'Phantoms.' I have indeed decided to continue it.
Anyway, this was just amazing and I look forward to reading the next piece you post! :)