Review for The Rain

The Rain

(#) LoveSnape 2006-11-01

wow! this was fabulous!! im wondering... are you still writing this? or was it like a one-shot? Im just thinking of the possibilities... Imean, a narrative of Charlie's life would be hella cool... Anyway, I really liked!! Thanks for fabulousness!
FYI: its a little difficult to read, maybe another line break to separate paragraphs? that'd make it easier.
Thanks again!
Saffron

Author's response

Thank you very much. I wasn't sure if I was going to put another section in but I will think about it now. Thank you for the feedback about the paragraph. I will definitely get around to that!