Review for Under City Lights

Under City Lights

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-07-14

Da dada daaaa da dadada DAAAAAA!! RETURN OF BRENDON THE SUPER ASS! Seriously, how much more of an ass can you get?! 62?! Wow, that's... Disgusting. (And here's my immature mind thinking it should be 69... XD)

AND I WANNA KNOW WHY ALEX IS SUCH A BAD PERSON! Seriously? That's all they're gonna give her? 'Hes a bad person; stay away from him.' I'd be asking why and would want more clarification than just 'He's bad.'

AND SPENCER! I don't know whether to giggle, jump in the story and hug him or give him a bit of a slap for being so.... So.... Well meaning in a really annoying way. If that makes sense.

Argh, finally I was able to read this! I've been slightly busy lately. I keep putting off reading What is Love?, especially cause I saw that little word that terrifies me so much when I see a good story - "Complete." So yeah. Still working up the courage to read that one. Each time I see the message in my email that reminds me I just wanna scream, "WHY WORLD, WHY?! WHY DID SHE HAVE TO END IT?!?!?!?" I'll get over it someday.

Or not.

Author's response

Haha, working on his superhero theme song, are ya?
I know! I cringed slightly when I wrote it but I do legitimately know people with numbers that high, or higher and I knew even more like that in high school. (Haha, I didn't think of that. My perversion is rusty evidently.)

Oh, don't worry. There will be more with him, haha. He won't just disappear, and with that everyone saying he's bad. Yeah, when people say things like that it drives me crazy. Then again I could question just about anything.

How about both? It makes sense. XD I had trouble writing him completely... well meaning, without the ... weird-ness. I just couldn't write him so straight forward, I needed it to be weird. Maybe because I'm weird.

Hope all is well!
Awww, it terrified me to click it too. Man, I sure hope I didn't screw the ending up. I look forward to your eventual review, take your time. ;) Haha.
I'll try to keep you occupied until the pain subsides, and you'll have to do the same for me when MTYK ends, though I'm desperately hoping it never does. I'm okay with forever stories. We can both be in our 90's and still I'll want more, lol.