:) This
Was
Amazing!!
I loved it all!!! It has such a good plot. And I also like how we see Mikey in kind of a different, foolish sense when he gets married but also I can still understand why. You wrote the story perfectly and it all just works brilliantly. I would also love to see this be continued, but in your own time. I'm sure you have lots of requests!!! :)
Author's response
Thank you very much!
I wasn't really sure if the plot worked, so it's a real relief to know that you think it did. I'm glad you think you saw Mikey differently in that he acted foolishly, yet at the same time understandably.
I think that this will definitely have a second part, but it may take a few days to produce.
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :D