Great start, despite the shortness :) And I could try beta-ing (I guess that would be how you'd write that) for you, not sure how good I am, though :)xx
Author's response
Thank you! :D I'm super excited for this story. :) THAT WOULD BE WONDERFUL THANK YOU. I really just need someone to check grammar and whatnot because I was never the best at grammar. My email is on my profile :)