Review for auditions for a story based on a manga/anime

auditions for a story based on a manga/anime

(#) bloocheese 2012-07-16

aw crap scribble out my other audition and go for this one :3
Full name: Zora Jacobsen
Nickname: Z
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Animal: A rat
Eye colour: Light brown
Hair: short, almost boy-ish, black
Body description (weight, height ect): 5`10, has a boy-ish and lanky body
Everyday clothes (include shoes and any jewellery): Usually a beanie, with a normal black shirt and some black skinnies. She likes to wear boy clothes, since girl clothes never really fit her well. She usually has a bracelet on her, and her shoes are the usual red vans she always wears. She has other prettier and better clothes but she prefers to wear something comfortable.
Special occasion clothes (include shoes and jewellery): When it's a special occasion, she usually wears a blue dress that she owns with a necklace and some black flats.
Any tattoos/piercings: Nope
Anything else to do with looks: She wears a skirt when she doesn't have any more pants to put on.
Appearance as your chosen Zodiac animal: she's a white rat with really bright brown eyes like super bright you could see them in the dark
Personality: She's quiet, and very shy around others she doesn't know, sarcastic, and has a dark sense of humor. But once you get to be friends with her she begins to be nicer to you.
How do you act around other Zodiac members?: She acts like her normal sarcastic self, unless if they're her friends then she's nice.
How do you act around normal humans?: She's quiet and doesn't really talk to them. She envies them, because she'd really like to be a normal human.
How do you feel about the curse?: She doesn't really like it. But she just really tries to get on with her life.
How do you feel about an outsider finding out about the curse? What do you do/say?: It kinda bothers her, because they could probably tell people and even though she doesn't have many friends it kinda lowers her chances of even getting any friends if people find out what she is.
Likes: Sleeping in all day, playing her bass guitar, listening to her ipod and eating cake and sushi.
Dislikes: Having to wake up early, not being able to listen to her ipod during car rides, having to eat gross things.
Hobbies: Sleeping, reading, playing her bass.
Hopes for the future: She hopes that maybe she'll find someone that likes her and doesn't think she's weird.
Anything else: She thinks Mikey's kinda cute but she's too scared to even show her feelings.

AHHH I love Fruits Basket!! I hope your story ends up being well!! :)