A friend recommended your story, and I read the whole thing today - I enjoyed your premises, and agree to a certain extent with the fact that Harry and Hermione cannot just practice catch and release, however, I do feel that the executions would be much better handled with a piercing hex in the ear, or a decapitation, rather than a hex that requires hatred to power it.
I do not much care for the latinized name - one reason I do not read Naruto fics is the unpronouncable names.
thanks for sharing this is a very good story
Author's response
I'm glad that people recommend my stories. I try not to disappoint smiley face
By using spells that require hatred, they're not 'going through the motions'. It makes them believe that every death is for a reason, every death means something.
Also, Hermione would have to slowly grow into the gore. Harry could probably handle it, but not with Hermione around.
Does that mean you also don't care much for the Naruto Manga? Also, I'm changing the name. Might be easier to pronounce, but it depends.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, and please thank your friend for me.