(#) soki 2012-07-17
I wish you would have given the Grangers the names that are mostly used in fanfiction. Dan and Emma. Takes awhile to figure out who you are talking about. Good story though.
Author's response
While Dan and Emma are cute, they get boring after a while. The names are fanon, not canon, so I see no reason why I should go with that cliche when I'm already trying to take the cliche of bonding stories and turn it into something knew. And I don't think it should be too confusing since I introduced Alex and Jane as Hermione's parents in the very beginning of the chapter.
But I digress. Thanks for the review.