That was like perfect it was really intriguing (intrigueing? intriguying? me no know) and really tense and suspenseful. Like when I'm reading tense stuff I always ruin it by suddenly glancing at the next page to find something MASSIVE has happened and I'm like oh. So it was hard for me not to do that. Hot stuff!
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Author's response
Yeah I think it's Intriguing but then I can't spell so who knows?
Thank you so much! And I do that three cheers for ruining stories right?
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Also you need to update like pronto! I miss your words okay, you're killing me