This is pretty damn awesome so far- I really like your style of writing (finally, someone who uses grammar well!), and despite the ridiculous amount of high school frerards I've read (is this a frerard...?), you've managed to make it really original and interesting. I also really like your Frank so far and his darkly sarcastic sense of humor, it's great and adds a little bit of an edge to the story.
I really, really enjoyed reading this, and I can't wait for your update- this is added to my alerts :D Very well written.
Lucy X_O
Author's response
Oh, thank you so much! The original story was a Frerard, so it probably will be further on. Thank you so much for reading, it means so much to me xx