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My Beautiful Rescue
My Beautiful Rescue
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Greyscaleinblue
2012-07-19
It's good but some of the ways you position your sentences don't flow, like in the beginning it was short and choppy. I am definitely a Jonas fan, have been since '07 :) We should totally chat sometime!