Review for Would You Let Me?

Would You Let Me?

(#) snake56tongue 2012-07-20

Woah. This was beautiful, almost like poetry or something.
And I totally agree, Joncer doesn't get the attention it deserves. There should be more of it! Sadly, no one seems to write it on here, but there are communities for it on LiveJournal if you want to look on there :)
Again, this was beautiful. I loved it :)
Being the angst-lover I am, I preferred the first ending, but I liked how you allowed it to be happy as well :D Great job!