Review for auditions for a story based on a manga/anime

auditions for a story based on a manga/anime

(#) princeyukisohma 2012-07-20

Hey, it's bloocheese just on my new account and I realized my audition didnt have much details
so i edited it and added more details.

Full name: Zora Jacobsen
Nickname: Z, Bean
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Animal: A rat
Eye colour: Dark blue.
Hair: short, almost to her shoulders, a very dark blue that almost seems black but not quite and slightly curly.
Body description (weight, height ect): 5`10, has a boy-ish and lanky body and absolutely no curves and hates it. She's pale and bruises easily. 
Everyday clothes (include shoes and any jewellery): She tends to wear all black. She wears a normal black shirt with a cardigan over it. She usually has a beanie on her. She wears black converse with black skinny jeans, though she doesn't own much pants and wears a skirt usually when it the last day of the week. She has a bracelet on her that is blue. she always wears it because it reminds her of her dad
Special occasion clothes (include shoes and jewellery):  She owns a blue dress that she likes because it doesn't make her seem so flat chested. She keeps her hair down and wears some black flats and doesn't really like to put on much jewelry except for her bracelet.
Any tattoos/piercings: Nope
Anything else to do with looks: She has a birth mark on her wrist the shape of a bean and that's where her nickname originally came from. She also likes to wear eyeliner and shes really insecure about her body.
Appearance as your chosen Zodiac animal: She's a white rat and her eyes are very, very bright that you could probably see them even in the dark. She also moves very quickly in her rat form. 
Personality: She's a lot like Saki and a bit of Yuki too, she's polite and speaks her opinion, even
when it might be hurtful. To those she doesn't like or know well, she doesn't show her emotions very well with them and she doesn't smile unless she's with someone very dear and close to her. Also she scares her classmates with the way she acts and sometimes even pretends she's a witch and that whoever bothers her  will be her next victim.
How do you act around other Zodiac members?: She doesn't get along with them very well, but doesn't mind it at all.
How do you act around normal humans?: She's tries to keep them as far away from her as possible, and rarely interacts with them.
How do you feel about the curse?: She hates it, but she doesn't say it nor show it. 
How do you feel about an outsider finding out about the curse? What do you do/say?: As long as they promise not to tell anyone, they're okay with her.
Likes: Sleeping, her bass, cake and sushi, getting some quiet time for herself.
Dislikes: Waking up early, people.
Hobbies: Sleeping, reading, playing her bass.
Hopes for the future: She hopes that maybe she'll find someone that likes her and doesn't mind that she's different, and hopefully if
it's a male she'll be able to hug them. 
Anything else: She thinks Mikey's kinda cute but she's too scared to even show her feelings.

Please update the story soon I know you barely started it but I'm just so excited.