I am really enjoying this, and hope to see it go through to the end and beyond. I find that your writing style is very easily followed, and appreciate that fact. There are many out there that have to go through a brain filter to decipher sometimes, and I'm happy to say that my filter is off when reading this.
Ron: I completely agree with Hermoine's summation of him. He's a jealous prat who needs to grow up. If anything, Harry deserves to be jealous of the redhead for the simple fact of the boy's family. He was raised with two doting parents and a plethora of siblings. Honestly, I think his involvement with Harry was the same as Ginny's: seeing The-Boy-Who-Lived, instead of Harry-The-Traumatised.
HHr: I hope this develops realistically. Two many fics have the pair 'realise their feelings' and immediately shag. Not bad if you're into that sort of thing, but I believe the pair of them respect each other enough to want to make it mean something. Not opposed to them waking up in the next chapter and have a snog session, though. Seems appropriate, no matter the 'morning mouth syndrome'. Honestly, these two were written as perfect matches for each other, and I'm still pissed at JK for not doing that.
The war footing that's taken the pair is actually nice to see, even if it's a bit disturbing. War is never pretty, and I thing JK held back because her series was considered Children's Books.
Lastly, Thank You for having Harry acknowledge his grief for Hedwig with Hermoine. That was touching to see, and the most revealing about how they feel for each other. He never cried in front of anyone, but he did with Hermoine. That's a personal breakthrough, if ever there was one.
Tracking this, and hope you update soon. I don't mind long chapters, just so you know. The bouncing around from the different points of view is nice to see as well.
Kudos on a wonderful story!