Review for Forbidden Desires

Forbidden Desires

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-07-22

Trust me - it's a good thing! :)

But holy crap!

Wow, just... ungghh I honestly can't wait to see where this is going. I mean, you sure know how to make a cliff hanger! I hope you'll be updating soon. :D

And KASSIDY! GIRL, WHEN YOUR ADOPTIVE BROTHER THAT YOU HAVE BEEN LUSTING AFTER KISSES YOU AND TELLS YOU HE HAS FEELINGS FOR YOU, YOU DO NOT JUST STAND THERE LIKE SOME WAX MANNEQUIN! YOU TELL HIM THAT HIS FEELINGS ARE FUCKIN' RECIPROCATED! Ugh! facepalm

Fix this /NOW/, please!

Author's response

Thanks! :D

Haha, I tried... and yeah, I just updated but it's another cliffhanger. I'll try to update again sometime next week! Like I said, I don't want so many pauses in between updates anymore.

;) Exactly! lol.