Review for Personalised stories anyone?

Personalised stories anyone?

(#) XEvil_AngelX 2012-07-23

Name: Sam Dakota Alexx
Nickname: Koda, Alex
Appearance:
Hair- Goes to her middle back, dyed bright red (Hayley Williams meets Gerard Way red) and worn straight
Eyes- Silver with hazel in the center
5"5 scrawny (but not REALLY light), pale, long legs and fingers
Personality: Bubbly, shy, warms up to you as she gets to know you, caring
Likes: Hanging out with friends, bass, drawing/painting/colouring (oh I LOVE colouring)
Dislikes/fears: Getting back into self-harm, losing more of her family, getting her heart broken
What do you want the story to be about?: 'Le um
It has been a year since her parents died (house fire) and the guys want to cheer her up so they all get together and start a game of truth or dare (with her) and kind of a 7 minutes in heaven thing (oh and MCR boy= Moikey :P)

OR

She is older, prego ('cause I forgot how to spell the word) and Mikey (yes I like the younger way bro, bite me) is on tour and she goes into labour and wonders if he will make it (blah blah blah Fluffy fic)

Author's response

:O I used your second idea but with Frank. That's so awesomely creepy! I think I'll do both of them because they're both awesome! XD Also, in The Inbetweeners fic, can I use the older brother as a bully? :'3 xx