Argh... facepalm I feel so bad cause I'm only just reading this chapter now.
JONCER! Whoooo! XD Anyway, besides the point.
Despite the fact that the image I have in my head of Andrew is of Andrew Dost from fun., I still think that he is a cunning bastard who's slightly sick. Well, duh, it's his greed for power, but even though he follows the typical bad guy character - greedy for absolute control - he's not actually your stereotypical bad guy. I've never read a story or watched a movie with a bad/evil guy quite like the one you've written Andrew to be, and it's very refreshing.
And you better have a very good idea of how Ryan and Jon are gonna save the others and get Jon's role back, cause I have absolutely no fucking is what they're going to do next what's going to happen. Not even a theory, which is strange, because normally I get atleast a few thoughts about what the next chapter of a story will entail.
Anyway, I really cannot wait to read the next part! :) This is amazing.