Awww... This was a nice change from all the violence and drama of the previous chapter. :)
I don't know if it's just me being weird, but I found Anna a bit... Over-bearing I guess. I don't know. Like, I get that Christian's her friend and she's worried about her, but when she was being all threatening to Jon... I don't know, I just didn't like her in that particular part. But that doesn't matter cause I love your Jon! I think the best part of this was when Christian called him her hero and was opening up a bit more about that night at the hotel or wherever it was. That was just really sweet and gush-worthy. :)
Can't wait for the next part!
Author's response
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Very! Yeah, she's the horribly unbearable best friend type... I made her a little (lot) over the top. Aww, thank you! Yep, the horrible nights spent at the hotel. I'm glad you liked it. :P
I'll try to update soon!