You did a great job with Skeeter's article. Mainly, though, you've done amazingly well with the villains of the story. Rather than having them use one half-assed plan at the end, they're disrupting the Order and doing an excellent job of it. THESE are the Death Eaters that people fear.
Thank you! My main calling is to give you a realistic depiction of what a wizarding war would be like. The Villains need to be believable and who doesn't love Rita? ~Jim