Amazing, and I love the way you have Tayuya as she is one of my favorite female characters In Naruto and I thought they could of done so much more with her, which you did! The only thing that I think you should consider (other than doing a few spelling checks before submitting a chapter) Is give them a little more free will as Tayuya completely and utterly broke which I don't think is very likely considering she is a very hot tempered person, but otherwise I love it all.