Review for Forbidden Desires

Forbidden Desires

(#) ReddyDevil 2012-08-01

WHAT?!?!

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Argh. So much hurt and just Ryan/, the way he just stood there and let it happen, and how he tried to protect Kassidy and just /ugh. I can't believe that they've kicked him out, and especially that last thing that Kassidy said to him about only saying sorry if it wasn't real? Wow. Just... Way to pack a punch to the guts.

I feel so sorry for the both of them. :( You better fix this with your next update, please!!!!

Author's response

:P

I was trying my hardest, I'm glad this chapter was received well!

Thanks so much for the review!

...I'll try to update as soon as I can. :D And hopefully it'll be at least a bit 'fixed'- from your point of view. (: