Review for I Shouldnt Love You

I Shouldnt Love You

(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-03

Oh my god baby Frankie :O oh he is so small noooo

honestly I should have expected something like that after reading the description

I'm both disgusted and intreagued so I'll be watching to see just where you take this. The only thing I would suggest is more paragraph breaks, especially around the dialog. Other than that; awesome.

Author's response

Thanks ;P