Review for Personalised stories! Yey!

Personalised stories! Yey!

(#) atomickilljoy 2012-08-13

Name: Jennifer Delores
Looks-
Hair: Black, up to her neck, has one hot pink highlight
Eyes: brown
Body: 5'4,the average weight, she has a dancer's body, but doesn't really dance. She only dances at parties that her family hosts

Clothing: Band t shirts, usually chosen in the men's section, with a pair of skinny jeans and converse

Characters includedGerard,maybe the rest of the band, her older brother(DUN DUN DUNNNN...),her mom, and Jennifer's bandmates, who love her like a sister.

General storyline: She loves rock music, and decides to form a band (with boys because she only gas buy best friends) with her as the singer. They become slightly famous, and Gerard sees her and lovey dovey sparks fly. Her older brother, who is way too over protective, is not ok with this, and her family(basically only her mom and brother) are oblivious to her even having a band, and find out by seeing her on tv. Her mom is a bit impressed but still kind of mad. Her family doesn't approve at all. Her brother never comes to terms with her being with Gerard(or as he refers to him, "that filthy rock star"), or with her being a rock star, but will soon learn to accept it, despite wanting to punch Gerard's face out everytime he touches his precious little sister. Her mom still wants her to be a lawyer, but soon comes to terms with her daughter being sort of famous.

Anything else?: She is Mexican American, so no Spanish is needed.
She also has black glasses

Name the brother and her bandmates whatever you'd like :)

Thanks a ton! I'll be reading the other stories! :D