Okay, this is the part where I'm supposed to leave a long-ass review about how I worship the ground you walk on, but I'm a little busy screaming because I still can't believe you like my art. Now that that's out of the way, we now return to your regularly scheduled rant.
Once again, I am stunned by your impossibly-accurate description of the mind of a teenager getting their first taste of rebellion. I will never know how you find the words and piece them together, but by some miracle, you have strung together the perfect letters that make up the shit-show that is adolescence. It's extremely rare for me to get as close to a story like I did with this, and I don't regret a minute of it. I can feel what the characters are feeling, and it's so vivid and wonderful that I find myself already dreading when this masterpiece comes to an end. I also find myself completely surprised by how likable your original characters are! Many of the OC's I've come across on this site merely stood in the way of the plot and acted as a distraction, but yours are nothing like that. Your characters are actually important, and you've done a brilliant job of weaving them into the story and giving them a role to play in the plot. For the first time, I actually like the idea of a relationship between Frank and an original character. Robbie is unbelievably perfect, and I can't wait to see what happens to him later on.
There's no doubt about it: this story is the greatest fic I've ever read, and you have definitely made your mark on this site.
~ Haili