As everyone above me, I read this chapter thinking ah mah gawd ah mah gawd ah mah gawd, are they? Needless to say I
F.A.N.G.I.R.L.E.D (writing it like this to express the extremes of insanity in this fangirlism)
-to the point I woulda shouted, albeit refrained as doing so would have resulted in the wakement of Ze Angreh Mama.
In all seriousness though, you're an Amazing writer, like legit, and it breaks my lil' heart when I see you doubt your writing. You got talent gurrl, embrace it and fucking KNOW it, and PWN the bastards which be hatin', whomever they may be.
Mucho Amor,
KK.