You already know how I feel about this story, but let me just say...HOLY SHIT! My heart was actually racing while reading this...of course it could be due to the immense amount of caffine that I had today, but I would like to think that your writing had something to do with it as well.
Author's response
i do already know how you feel, ya know, since we have ESP or whatever
yes, you did have a lot of caffeine. we went from talking about Danny Elfman to our hatred of using generalized terminology to describe music. thanks for being a good inter-web friend :)