Half-way through here, i teared up majorly. This IS the best chapter yet, and I personally can see this as an ending for your fic, as a "tearaway".
Umm, i honestly caot think of how you can improve... Just keep up the fantastic work! :D
L.S.E
XOXO
Author's response
Thank you for reviewing! Have more ideas for the end of the story but I did also feel like this as an end could have worked. Unfortunatly I am very soppy and need to make the ending at least vaguely happy. Hope you will read on to find out how the story ends though :)