Whoa. Firstly, it's a whoa because this chapter was AWESOME! And second, cuz I thought you were older than me. You're writing style is so mature, I just assumed you were like seventeen. But if you're just turning fourteen now, and I'm turning fifteen in four months, I'm nearly a year older than you. Wow. Good for you! This is so great, update soon!
Author's response
I lol'd at how you said I have a mature writing style because writing is really one of the only things I have the ability to be mature in.
And I also got my start in writing by filling entire notebooks full of nothing but loop-de-loop thingies. trufax bro
But I'm flattered, nonetheless. I still have a lot to learn about this whole writing thing, though XD