It's so amazingly well-written and cute and funny, yet still emotional. I burst into tears at the "ice cream can't kiss you back" part. And then I smiled and melted like the ice cream at the Brennybear part.
New favorite one-shot.
Author's response
Thank you very much! I'm super relieved that you found it funny, as that's something I'm really trying to work into my writing at the moment.
Thanks for leaving such a nice review! :D