Review for Personalised stories anyone?

Personalised stories anyone?

(#) Bella_Jinxx 2012-08-22

We had a deal- I do you two oneshots, you do me two oneshots. It's a fair deal ;)

Name: Alice Armstrong

Nickname: Ali, Father Ted

Appearance: Has white-blond hair cut like Bob's in the BP era. Icy blue eyes, pale. Has vampire bites and a tattoo of a gravestone on her wrist. The gravestone says 'RIP Jared Armstrong: Dead but in no way forgotten, your weary widow marches on."

Personality: Snappy, sarcastic, slightly rude. Once you get to know her, she's very sweet and witty.

Likes: Chocolate, waking in cemeteries, music and grapes.

Dislikes/fears: Hates when people give her shit about Jared, clowns, dark alleyways and trumpets.

What do you want the story to be about?: Okay. 5 years ago, Alice's twin brother Jared was killed in a dark alleyway. (Henceforth that fear.) She was 21 at the time. She's kept it a secret for a long time. One day, the bitchy sluts at her high school find out and give her absolute hell over it. She breaks down and runs to a cemetery, where she falls at Jared's grave and starts crying. A dude with long black hair walks up and comforts her. (The dude being Gerard.) He takes her back to his house and gets her to tell him the story. He feels incredibly sorry for her, because his brother was murdered too. They bond and eventually, Gerard kisses her.
-4 years later-
Gerard and Alice's relationship is still going strong. He takes her to the headstone where they met and proposes. She says yes and yeah. La la la.

Sorry for the incredibly long and detailed description but yeah.

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Author's response

Wait... Mikey's dead in this... D': MOIKEYY NOO!!! xx