Hey. I know before I was a bitch, and I'm sorry about that, but I have an idea you can use.
Make it where all of the guys are playing a video game like Mortal Kombat or Call of Duty. And there is like a forbidden level. So they go on the level and the next thing they know, they actually end up in the game.
Good idea? Use it if you like.
And I don't know why this is rated down. I enjoyed it.
Can't wait to see more of your writing.
Author's response
I might totally do that!