The story so far is great! I love the eerie parts the most. The smut was good but thats not kind of thing. I like horror, so I think that it would be good to make Frank meet Gerard again and have the story be all creepy and stuff... Great story pleaseeeeee carry on with it!! Haha when I read this I was at home on my own so I just sat in my completeley dark house with all the lights off reading your story... Probably because I had jet lag and was somewhat sleep deprived but, yeah! Great story (again) pleaseeeee carry on!
Author's response
Thanks! Horror is kind of a new thing for me, so I've mixed it all up with everything else. I'm so pleased you like it and thanks very much for reviewing!