Whaaaaat? Why would you hate it? This was beautiful and sad and romantic and tragic and comic and I think I just used up all my movie genres. And you wrote it so well, not cheesey at all which is what I would do totally just turn it into gorganzola and spread it on a cracker.
Oh, and this bit: "Actually, I want to kiss more than your face, if we’re being honest but I think this chapter is rated PG13 so maybe not right now" XD funny stuff, dude.
Update as soon as you can, now my boys are together waiting is no longer an option!!
SF
Author's response
Blarrrr idk it just hadnt been coming together as well as I'd of liked it to but super glad you enjoyed it!
Eheheheh I'll reply more when I'm not on a phone but thannnkkkk youuuuu