This is awesome! I love it and um, yeah, keep updating, s'il vous plait.
And I admit that I kind of shrieked in my head when I saw the names Luke, Lawrence and Kier...I love Fearless Vampire Killers.
~Kaleidoscope
Author's response
I was trying to think of a name for the bullies and I looked at my desktop background for inspiration and I had them as the background so I picked them x'D
Thanks for reviewing :3